Showing posts with label Sahyadri Books Trivandrum. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Sahyadri Books Trivandrum. Show all posts

Tuesday, March 26, 2019

087. B’Ware of W-Beginning Writers’ Publishing Platforms? P S Remesh Chandran


087. 

B’Ware of W-Beginning Writers’ Publishing Platforms? P S Remesh Chandran

Editor, Sahyadri Books & Bloom Books, Trivandrum


 01. Article Title Image By Pasja1000. Graphics: Adobe SP.

First published: 26 March 2019

Good things saying farewell to the world is something which saddens us. Author-friendliness is a good thing about not a few publishing sites. They provide authors with good publishing interfaces and provide many other supportive things like lengthy and links-rich author bio pages. In return they get data, information and pages which no other way they will get except by employing highly paid staff. But when enough data has been accumulated, there is a tendency to oust writers from those sites and escape with the materials contributed by those writers.

Google’s Knol and Yahoo’s Associated Content and Yahoo Contributors’ Network.

Google has been famous for retiring its many famous services, caring nothing whether they are good to the world, but only caring whether they provide good and steady revenue resources. Their Knol, abbreviation for Knowledge, was a very good writing platform at which one could write and article in any language and publish it in multi languages simultaneously. It disappeared one day. Not that they escaped with the content; they of course provided time for authors to download their contributed content from their archives. Google Plus which also served as a fine publishing platform for articles, notes, images and videos was the last to go. Still they provided authors with an opportunity to download their content from archives as ZIP files. Knol and Google Plus did not pay authors. Their Blogger platform still remains and no one knows when and whether it would go.

Yahoo’s old Associated Content was renamed as Yahoo Contributor Network. Because they paid, unlike Google, they also held control over articles to ensure good content. For this, they evaluated and checked articles through supervisors before they were accepted for publishing in their platform. They paid according to a system based on Payment Per 1000 Impressions and also provided writers opportunity to take up writing assignments for payment and even showed them what assignments were available based on their experience and portfolios of interest. They even ran an online university to coach writers and even awarded degrees and diplomas! It was an excellent system for coaching writers- their writers and free of course. Anyway, Associated Content and Yahoo Contributor Networks have gone and they have not come with something new. Only the Yahoo News remains which is, it is assumed, invitees only.

Wiki Answers did this and Wikinut may do this.

What will happen if a good publishing site turns sour, angers its contributors and gradually begins to fail in fulfilling its responsibility to writers and regular readers? Such things usually happen- though not rarely- in the publishing world. ‘Publishing world’ here means digital publishing platforms, not traditional book-publishing companies. Because the last to come into this field- Writerly Words- also has its name beginning with a W, I think I have to mention by name two fine publishing platforms which recently either turned hostile to writers, or ultimately closed doors to them. They are Wiki Answers and Wikinut.

First step is providing writers with good intellectual challenges and keeping them writing.

Wiki Answers, or Answers Dot Com, was once described (by themselves?) as the fifth-largest website as regard to accumulation and dissemination of knowledge. Formed following the patterns of the famous and now indispensable Wikipedia, ten thousands of students asked questions and thousands of contributors answered them, all going to a digital data bank. Contributors worked on a voluntary basis and were not paid for their time and services, but were allowed a Profile Page in their site. There they could display a few lines about themselves and provide links to their sites, blogs and portfolios. Many of these contributors worked as Supervisors also, devoting their precious time to enlarging and refining this useful and unique answer bank. There were also Halls of Fame- monthly, yearly and all-time- where the names of the foremost answerers in each category were displayed. In place of an incentive, and also as an encouragement, supervisors were sent gifts each year. Sometimes it would be a bag, and sometimes it would be a blanket. I don’t know about Category and Higher Supervisors: I was only a Floating Supervisor and a long-standing contributor.

Second step is kicking writers out and escaping with their contributions.

All things were going well till some changes in policy took place. This may have been due to new brats entering the Board. Old Hats won’t do such rash and ugly things. Or, some large corporation which is the least concerned about free knowledge gathering and free dissemination of it may have taken over. Anyway, one day, the contributors and supervisors were told by e-mail that they were not any more contributors and supervisors, they were not to log-in anymore, and that their profile pages have been taken down. So also were their names removed from where they appeared alongside the answers they contributed. So, this once-prestigious knowledge bank and free answering platform escaped with everything contributed by thousands of writers, to merchandise these writers’ creations at will at wherever they choose. Today they have all the answers and questions but no names or profile pages of contributors. It was plain piracy. [I do have files of what I contributed and emails of their notifications of publishing. I may someday publish it as a book for the student community to use free].


When Wikinut kicks out writers, they will escape with the full version of all articles free.

The same kind of brats-take-over is happening in Wikinut too. It was considered one of the finest writers’ publishing platforms in the world. In fact, as regard to web resources offered to writers, theirs were excellent. Their publishing interface also was one of the finest in the world among those freely accessible to writers. For years they paid writers in proportion to the advertisement revenue their articles generated. I don’t know how much, because I never even once clicked the ‘Your Payments’ link during my years writing there. (I enjoyed writing there till recently, and the best of my writer-friends were gained from there). In 2017, they stopped paying writers, saying they were thinking about shutting down unless paying writers could be stopped. They lost hundreds of fine writers as a result, along with thousands of articles they contributed through years. A few including me remained, for the sole reason that all articles were open to everyone including students and teachers free. Then they limited Author Bio to 400 characters which meant just two, at the most three sentences. It was like ridiculing writers and challenging them to leave. Then they introduced another change- writers could no more include their names in the titles of their articles- a change which achieved nothing and pleased someone in the board who never in life has been able to put down in words in the form of an article what he or she has in mind. That means, if I intended to publish an article titled ‘New Books From P. S. Remesh Chandran’, I had to title it just ‘New Books’ which would be meaningless anyway. More writers are sure to leave Wikinut, but not me, yet. The meanest thing about Wikinut is, though they allow contributors to download all their articles from archives, they will not allow complete delete of any article; you can edit and shorten the articles but they will keep all previous versions in archives. You know what this means- when they kick out writers finally and escape with their contributions like Wiki Answers did, they will use the full versions free.

Will the new Writerly Words also go the same way?

The point is brats may come to the Board, and the Administration. Uncouth changes may be introduced by the unripe people who somehow got into the information and publishing field. Larger corporations and companies may come with takes-over or mergers. Policies may change. History shows every such thing have only been discouraging and disappointing to writers in those platforms. The last to come to the publishing world is Writerly Words with its comparatively good web resources and supposedly assured writer-friendliness. But ‘Writerly Words’ also begins with a ‘W’ in its name. What will come of it in the future?
 



Tags:

Content Writing, English Prose, Free Student Notes, Indian Writers, Literary Articles Essays Reviews, Online Publishing, Prose Reviews Notes Appreciations, Prose To Poem, P S Remesh Chandran, Publishing Industry, Publishing Platforms, Sahyadri Books Trivandrum, W-Beginning Writers’ Publishing Platforms, Wiki Answers Wikinut Writerly,

Link: https://sahyadribooks-remesh.blogspot.com/2019/03/087-bware-of-w-beginning-writers.html 

  

About the Author P. S. Remesh Chandran: 

02. Author Profile of P S Remesh Chandran by Sahyadri Archives.

Editor of Sahyadri Books & Bloom Books, Trivandrum. Author of several books in English and in Malayalam. And also author of Swan: The Intelligent Picture Book. Born and brought up in the beautiful village of Nanniyode in the Sahya Mountain Valley in Trivandrum, in Kerala. Father British Council trained English teacher and Mother University educated. Matriculation with distinction and Pre Degree Studies in Science with National Merit Scholarship. Discontinued Diploma studies in Electronics and entered politics. Unmarried and single. 

Author of several books in English and in Malayalam, mostly poetical collections, fiction, non fiction and political treatises, including Ulsava Lahari, Darsana Deepthi, Kaalam Jaalakavaathilil, Ilakozhiyum Kaadukalil Puzhayozhukunnu, Thirike Vilikkuka, Oru Thulli Velicham, Aaspathri Jalakam, Vaidooryam, Manal, Jalaja Padma Raaji, Maavoyeppoleyaakaan Entheluppam!, The Last Bird From The Golden Age Of Ghazals, Doctors Politicians Bureaucrats People And Private Practice, E-Health Implications And Medical Data Theft, Did A Data Mining Giant Take Over India?, Will Dog Lovers Kill The World?, Is There Patience And Room For One More Reactor?, and Swan, The Intelligent Picture Book. 

Face Book: https://www.facebook.com/psremeshchandra.trivandrum
Twitter: https://twitter.com/PSRemeshChandra 

You Tube: http://www.youtube.com/user/bloombooks/videos
Blog: http://sahyadribooks-remesh.blogspot.com/
Site: https://sites.google.com/site/timeuponmywindowsill/
E-Mail: bloombookstvm@gmail.com
 
Post: P. S. Remesh Chandran, Editor, Sahyadri Books, Trivandrum, Padmalayam, Nanniyode, Pacha Post, Trivandrum- 695562, Kerala State, South India.



086. Swallow's Solitude. Poem By P S Remesh Chandran

086. 

Swallow's Solitude. Poem By P S Remesh Chandran

Editor, Sahyadri Books & Bloom Books, Trivandrum



01. Article Title Image By Masy. Graphics: Adobe SP.

First published: 26 March 2019 

SWALLOW'S SOLITUDE

P S Remesh Chandran

The hillocks where the village folk
Assembled for a fun-
There then at length dissected all
Subjects under the sun.

The roadside shop, where middle age men
Debated and did part;
Through various ways homeward they trod,
Next morning to restart.

Stooped by their golden burdens, swaying
Paddy fields lush lay
Stretching far, far to the edge of river
Beneath the mountain crag.

Tweeting sweet music to the squirrels
And the swarms of bees
Ransacking plantain groves for honey,
Sat high those nightingales.

Before the crows and cocks in morn
Raise loud their lofty horn,
Before the dews of night from trees
Fall down before the breeze,

Beside the rattling reeds alone I
Sat there satisfied;
Reflects in crystal-clear brook
A swallow’s solitude.


Bloom Books Channel has a video of this song.

02. Video Title Image By Masy. Graphics: Adobe SP.

Video Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LPrErCHTrgY

Tags:
English Poems Songs, Free Student Notes, Indian English Poets, Literary Articles Essays Reviews Poems, Nature Poems, Philosophical Poems, Poem Reviews Notes Appreciations, P S Remesh Chandran, Sahyadri Books Trivandrum, Swallow’s Solitude,

Article Link: https://sahyadribooks-remesh.blogspot.com/2019/03/086-swallows-solitude-poem-by-p-s.html 



About the Author P. S. Remesh Chandran: 

03. Author Profile of P S Remesh Chandran By Sahyadri Archives.

Editor of Sahyadri Books & Bloom Books, Trivandrum. Author of several books in English and in Malayalam. And also author of Swan: The Intelligent Picture Book. Born and brought up in the beautiful village of Nanniyode in the Sahya Mountain Valley in Trivandrum, in Kerala. Father British Council trained English teacher and Mother University educated. Matriculation with distinction and Pre Degree Studies in Science with National Merit Scholarship. Discontinued Diploma studies in Electronics and entered politics. Unmarried and single. 

Author of several books in English and in Malayalam, mostly poetical collections, fiction, non fiction and political treatises, including Ulsava Lahari, Darsana Deepthi, Kaalam Jaalakavaathilil, Ilakozhiyum Kaadukalil Puzhayozhukunnu, Thirike Vilikkuka, Oru Thulli Velicham, Aaspathri Jalakam, Vaidooryam, Manal, Jalaja Padma Raaji, Maavoyeppoleyaakaan Entheluppam!, The Last Bird From The Golden Age Of Ghazals, Doctors Politicians Bureaucrats People And Private Practice, E-Health Implications And Medical Data Theft, Did A Data Mining Giant Take Over India?, Will Dog Lovers Kill The World?, Is There Patience And Room For One More Reactor?, and Swan, The Intelligent Picture Book. 

Face Book: https://www.facebook.com/psremeshchandra.trivandrum
Twitter: https://twitter.com/PSRemeshChandra 

You Tube: http://www.youtube.com/user/bloombooks/videos
Blog: http://sahyadribooks-remesh.blogspot.com/
Site: https://sites.google.com/site/timeuponmywindowsill/
E-Mail: bloombookstvm@gmail.com
 
Post: P. S. Remesh Chandran, Editor, Sahyadri Books, Trivandrum, Padmalayam, Nanniyode, Pacha Post, Trivandrum- 695562, Kerala State, South India.





085. Today I Had A Strange Experience. Poem By P S Remesh Chandran


085. 

Today I Had A Strange Experience. Poem By P S Remesh Chandran
  
Editor, Sahyadri Books & Bloom Books, Trivandrum
 

01. Article Title Image 01 By Harli Marten. Graphics: Adobe SP.

 
First published: 2013

I regularly take part in discussions in a famous social site of experts and write in two special groups- Poetry and Literature, and Language, Literature & Criticism. A discussion on ‘Whether Poetry Has To Keep Form' became heated and I had to remain at the receiving end of severe but polished criticism for some of my views insisting on metrical form in poetry.


One criticism went: ‘No offense, but it is easy to make generalizations about things you have little or no hands-on experience with. Reading poetry is very different from writing it. How much poetry have you actually written (or tried to write)?’


Another criticism even went to asking me at last: ‘You do not seem to have understood the mechanics of poetry like many of us; have you ever read a poem or at least tried to write one?’


I decided to write my reply to these criticisms in the poetical form and invited other participant members also to reply in kind, i.e., by writing what they have to say not in prose but in poetry and continue the discussion. This poem was my first and original reply to them.

Once Malayalam poets wrote letters to each other in poetry and some even conversed in poetry.

 
In the Malayalam literature in my native land Kerala, there has been a long history and tradition of poets writing letters to each other in poetical form which though lessened the importance of prose for a time did indeed made poetry popular during that time, creating a rich branch of literature on its own. Many even conversed in poetry. Almost all Indian languages have this special branch of literature which became very interesting and rich through the years and is now a prominent feature of Indian literature. This trend gradually died out anyway.


02. Article Title Image 02 By Harli Marten. Graphics: Adobe SP
 
Today I Had A Strange Experience

P S Remesh Chandran

Today I had a strange experience,
Not in this group but in another group.


‘Poetry and Lit′rature' it is not,
In ‘Written or Revealed Poetry' thread.

Asked, have I written poems in my life?
I found it fit to answer it this way:

I'm writing this in reply to a miss,
I have never written poems in my life.

Have wondered where these poems all come from,
From human intellect or nature's store,

To be picked up at moments of revelation;
Or synthesized in rotten human brain!

I was inspired to write these wicked lines,
By those whose verses written were in sand.

Let us debate poetry in poems,
I hope she'll someday answer me in kind.

I ′am not doing anything again,
But asking questions all have answers for.

I have my answers, you can have yours,
This not an illiterate arena,

Where someone asks questions and another from,
Some academic circle answers them.

Some anxious are, to questions throw around,
Some eagerly waits there to answer them;

This not such school or college where one can,
En′tertain answers not from others too.

I know I'm Alexander Pope's close kin,
I stop here, to read Temple of Fame again.



03. Article Title Image 03 By Harli Marten. Graphics: Adobe SP

Tags:
  Discussion Poems, English Poems, Free Student Notes, Indian English Poets, Literary Articles Essays Reviews Poems, Metrical Form In Poetry, Philosophical Poems, Poem Reviews Notes Appreciations, P S Remesh Chandran, Sahyadri Books Trivandrum, Today I Had A Strange Experience,

Link: https://sahyadribooks-remesh.blogspot.com/2019/03/085-today-i-had-strange-experience-poem.html 


About the Author P. S. Remesh Chandran: 

Editor of Sahyadri Books & Bloom Books, Trivandrum. Author of several books in English and in Malayalam. And also author of Swan: The Intelligent Picture Book. Born and brought up in the beautiful village of Nanniyode in the Sahya Mountain Valley in Trivandrum, in Kerala. Father British Council trained English teacher and Mother University educated. Matriculation with distinction and Pre Degree Studies in Science with National Merit Scholarship. Discontinued Diploma studies in Electronics and entered politics. Unmarried and single. 

Author of several books in English and in Malayalam, mostly poetical collections, fiction, non fiction and political treatises, including Ulsava Lahari, Darsana Deepthi, Kaalam Jaalakavaathilil, Ilakozhiyum Kaadukalil Puzhayozhukunnu, Thirike Vilikkuka, Oru Thulli Velicham, Aaspathri Jalakam, Vaidooryam, Manal, Jalaja Padma Raaji, Maavoyeppoleyaakaan Entheluppam!, The Last Bird From The Golden Age Of Ghazals, Doctors Politicians Bureaucrats People And Private Practice, E-Health Implications And Medical Data Theft, Did A Data Mining Giant Take Over India?, Will Dog Lovers Kill The World?, Is There Patience And Room For One More Reactor?, and Swan, The Intelligent Picture Book. 

Face Book: https://www.facebook.com/psremeshchandra.trivandrum
Twitter: https://twitter.com/PSRemeshChandra 

You Tube: http://www.youtube.com/user/bloombooks/videos
Blog: http://sahyadribooks-remesh.blogspot.com/
Site: https://sites.google.com/site/timeuponmywindowsill/
E-Mail: bloombookstvm@gmail.com
 
Post: P. S. Remesh Chandran, Editor, Sahyadri Books, Trivandrum, Padmalayam, Nanniyode, Pacha Post, Trivandrum- 695562, Kerala State, South India.





Friday, November 9, 2018

083. Coromandel Fishers Sarojini Naidu Poem Appreciation By P S Remesh Chandran

083

Coromandel Fishers. Sarojini Naidu Poem. Appreciation By P S Remesh Chandran

Editor, Sahyadri Books & Bloom Books, Trivandrum


09th November 2018


Link: https://sahyadribooks-remesh.blogspot.com/2018/11/083-coromandel-fishers-sarojini-naidu.html

01. Article Title Image 1 & Graphics By Adobe SP.

The sea has been a fascination for man since his first appearance on this planet. Primitive forms of life originated first in the primeval soup of ancient oceans billions of years ago, migrated to land, and became bird, beast, reptiles and man. If we close both our ears with our fingers, we can still hear the reverberations of ocean waves crashing in our blood. Oceans have served not only as an ancient home to man but provided him with a multitude of marine products for sustenance also.

Evolution of bird, beast, reptiles, Neanderthals, Cro-Magnons and Homo-Sapiens from the sea.

  
Fishermen and fishing evolved into a distinctly defined profession and a community long before mankind turned to hunting and cultivation. Evolution first occurred in the sea, then on sea shores, then on inlands and then on mountains. After reptiles shortened their tails, grew wings and became birds, man was the next to evolve from apes living in the mountains and forests. The golden-haired and beautiful Neanderthals came first, then the shorter and lesser intelligent Cro-Magnons, and lastly the shortest and the least intelligent Homo sapiens. Whoever these ancients were and wherever they sheltered, they undoubtedly collected food from the sea. It was only natural for man turning to sea for food, to where he came from, as natural as a child turning to its mother for nourishment. And like a mother, the sea has eternally been providing for her children, without demanding much back except keeping her clean.

The swaying motions of a boat provided the rhythm and the wind and the wave the tune for the poem.

  02. Sustaining life in the planet By Cobber 17.  

The day-to-day life of fishermen had to be told in a poem by someone and Sarojini Naidu chose telling it as her privilege. The swaying motions of a boat she used to play in her childhood years in the Coromandel Bay in the Bay of Bengal provided the rhythm and the unrelenting sound of the waves and the wind provided the tune. The rest was easy and the poem was born as an immortal piece of world literature. When we read her lovely descriptions of the wind and wave and family life on shore, we are reminded of, and do subconsciously recreate, the tender feelings of a very young girl for the affection in human life for the astounding forces of nature.

It is only natural for a fisherman to start day by bowing before the life-giving sun.

  03. A playful child at sea shore By Sailu.d18.

Sun worshiping is prevalent among people of the nature. The Morning Sun and the Setting Sun both have their own worshipers among the Hindus of India. It is not a lone practice among the Hindus but the Ancient Egyptians also were stanch worshipers of the Sun. The name of the Egyptian Sun God was Ra. The name of their king Ramses originated from the Ra sound and this sound has been the basic root of the names of many mighty rulers in the world through centuries. It is such a powerful sound that a man or a woman with the Ra sound in his or her name would march to authority. (A book by the name ‘Magic Of Ra- The Most Cantankerous Political Theory Of India’ by P S Remesh Chandran has been published). As the Sun is the life-giver of the planet, it is only natural for a fisherman, or for anyone a devotee of nature, to start the day after bowing before his life-giver. Here in this poem we see not only the corporeal human beings but even the elemental sky also is offering its morning prayers to the rising Sun. In the very early dawn, it is the sky that wakens first and is offering its morning prayers to the Sun. Then the fishermen rise, before even the first ray of light touches the sky. Even the wind would not have risen then. ‘The wind would still be lying fast asleep in the arms of the dawn, like a child that has been crying all night.’ In real life it is indeed a beautiful sight to see the face of a child that had been crying all night but now is oversleeping peacefully into the late morning. The idea is not only romantic but scientific too, because the wind rises only after the sun has risen and the atmospheric temperature also has risen with the sun. 

Morning in sea shore is a scene of hectic activity before setting out to sea.

  04. Children are always happy in water By Biswarup Ganguly.

Morning in the sea shore is a scene of hectic activity. Fishermen of the Bay of Bengal, soon after they rise, begin works of preparation before going out to sea. The nets spread on the shore after yesterday's fishing for drying will have to be gathered. The catamarans turned upside down for drying and resting on the sand will have to be freed and carried to sea. Hasty but systematic preparations are going on, and now it is time to set out to sea for capturing the abundant and leaping wealth of the tide. Seeing all this clockwork-like activity, naturally, we will wonder if this wealth in the sea is their paternal property to capture at will. No, it is their mother’s, their maternal property. They are all the sons and rulers of the sea. The sea is their mother, the cloud is their brother and the waves are their comrades and playmates all. They have a birth right over the abundant wealth of the sea as sons of the sea. All mankind are. The sea shows her maternal affection to all sea-shore residents and fishermen. The sea is their only source of income and sustenance and the mother knows. 

Rolling mountains of waves and abysmal depths do not make them fear.

  05. Papa will be back soon. Child with mother By Biswarup Ganguly.

Where sea-gulls call, fishes are in plenty. Only in places where fishes are abundant would sea-gulls make their presence. So the fishermen hasten away, without delay, in the track of the sea-gull's call. They follow the path of the sea gull’s call to places where fishes are in plenty. Once there, their job is easy. Rolling mountains of waves, abysmal depths of sea and massive dark clouds looming in the sky normally should make anyone fear about their safety once the firm shore is left behind, but not the fishermen. They have no reason to fear the sea, clouds or waves. The sea is their mother, the cloud is their brother and the waves are their comrades all. Unwavering faith is everything in one’s life. 

Sea is a motherly lady and sea god Neptune is a father figure.

 
In the evening they would be tossing with waves somewhere in the mid-ocean, in unfathomable depths and faraway distances fully at the mercy of the wind and waves and sky where the sea god Neptune controls everything. But they needn’t fear; the all-powerful Sea God Neptune, strong enough even to hold the storm by its hair, will hide (protect) their lives in his broad breast. It’s fatherly affection! Once they are beloved to the sea, they are beloved to the mighty wind also who is the lover of the sea who moves the sea in whichever direction he desires and who in his turn is at the disposal of the sea god Neptune. In poetic conviction, sea is a motherly lady and sea god Neptune is a father figure who controls the wind and the sea and the human lives tossing in the waves . 

Which is sweeter to fishermen, the turbulent sea or the peaceful shore?

  06. Bondages as old as the sea By Biswarup Ganguly.

Which is the most restful and peaceful to a bird- the sky it soars in or the nest it returns to everyday? Which is dearer to a swan- the broad sunlit waters it swims in or the shaded watery glade it always makes its home of? Which is sweeter to a fisherman- the turbulent seas he makes a living out of or the peaceful shore he has built his hut in to live with his family? The fishermen indeed have sweet attractions on the shore. The shade of the coconut glade, the scent of the mango grove and the sands at night lit by the full moon, with the sounds of the voices of their most beloved ones nearby, are indeed sweet. 

The fishermen long for the sea and prefer the sea, insatiate with the sea.

  07. Resting at home after work By Biswarup Ganguly.

Glades are open spaces in a forest or wood; here it is an open space amid coconut palms beside the sea shore where fishermen’s children play and the fishermen spend an evening away. Groves are small woods, orchards or groups of trees; here it is a small mango orchard near the homes of the fishermen where they occasionally gather for passing time or assemble themselves for local celebrations. Going through such rustic pleasures in these glades are sweet to the fishermen indeed, but the kiss of the spray wash on their lips and the feel of happiness in the dance of the wild foam are sweeter to these fishermen. The sea and the shore are not two separate entities for them but one inseparable unity. They long for the sea and prefer the sea, insatiate with the sea. So, they row to the blue of the verge where the low sky comes down to meet the rising sea like an eager friend from above, and there they are at play like eternally happy children. 

The fishermen rowing towards the bluishness of the distant horizon, at sunset.

  08. Kerala Fishermen launching boat By Prime Jyothi.
 

Towards the close of the poem, we see the fisherman and his comrades, bathed in broad daylight, rowing towards the bluishness of the distant horizon where the sky lowers itself to come meeting the sea, where the sky and the sea are at play, like eager friends. They are not coming towards us to the landlocked limitedness of the shore but moving towards the broad and limitless expanse of many things. What better setting to land a poem on the sea! The poem itself is an illustration of how the sea, cloud, waves and human lives are interconnected. In some versions of this poem, the end line is seen to be changed as ‘Row, brothers, row to the edge of the verge’ which is not correct. The original line as written by the Nightingale of India must be ‘Row brothers row, to blue of the verge, where the low sky mates with the sea’. 

Remembering their forefathers who crossed vast expanses of oceans and went in search of new lands.



09. Fishermen's catch in Bangladesh By Balaram Mahalder.

Sometimes in their rustic simplicity, while sitting in their crude catamarans tossed up and down with waves, these fishermen will think about their ancient forefathers who crossed the vast expanses of oceans and went in search of new lands. The anxiety to know where all these waters are flowing into is what creates in sea-going people this urge to explore beyond horizons. Man’s yearning for sea voyages was what opened up the seas, chanced new continents like America and Africa to the found, and expanded the known world and distributed the human race far and wide. Remembering these forefathers even while battling with waves in new-found routes keeps mankind’s flame of wander-thirst burning, prompting him to explore still more unknown depths, though almost all the known depths and breadths of the oceans have already been surveyed and mapped. Sarojini Naidu too in her childhood years, rowing her fragile boat to and fro in waves in some sea-side cove in the Bay of Bengal, might have wondered in her sweet childish innocence where all these waters must be flowing into. 

The picture of a teen-aged poetess rowing her boat in the Bay of Bengal.
  10. Fishermen Life 1832 Painting By Carl Portmann 2.

When we sing this poem, if we sing this poem which is more like a song, we can see in our minds the teen-aged poetess rowing her boat in the Bay of Bengal conceiving things and thoughts, all finally evolving into this poem. The rhythm and tune of this poem, characteristic only of the sea, denotes the physical presence of an observant poet in the sea, rowing to and fro with waves in a rocking boat. There have been poems in all languages written keeping the rhythm of moving things in mind, written in the tune of moving buses, trains, ships, boats, horses and running rivers. The Night Mail follows the movement of a train, Coromandel Fishers the movement of a swaying boat, The Highway Man the rhythmic tiot-tiotting of a trotting and galloping horse, Tennyson’s Brooke the gentle and uninterrupted flow of a mountain river reaching the forests and village hamlets and Wander Thirst follows the rhythm of a ship in the sea. It is a special branch of poetry which has not been much researched into. 

ANNEXURE I: SPECIAL NOTE: SOME THOUGHTS ON SEA.
  11. Fisherman's Family Awaiting Return 19th Century Painting By Unknown.

‘The mind of a fisherman sitting on the bow of his boat is a kaleidoscope of thoughts- the beauty of the wind and water and light coming and going and mingling with the myriad miseries of his everyday life. Once, the sea was a very clean entity, except for the salt and remains of plant and marine life contained in it, which anyway sank to the bottom of the sea as sediments and came out again as oil after millions of years. Now it is littered with man’s spoils- plastics, oil spills, poisonous chemicals and nuclear waste deposits- and this broth which once gave birth to precious biological life may not do it again or sustain life anymore.’ 

‘The broad expanse of the sea, with the sun and moon and stars appearing like clock work in the horizon, creating regular tides and the harsh sunlight scorching and the soft moonlight soothing the weathered bodies of sailors at sea, have taken away the fear of depth from man and have brought men very close to their creator many millions of times in the sea. And there is brutality too in the soul of the sea, sending tsunamis landward, wrecking ships, destroying islands and carving away great chunks of land from her eternal lover, the shore.’
  12. The eternal fascination for man By Vinayaraj.

The roar of the sea has provided perfect background noise for poets to compose poems through ages, making their thoughts kinetic, by imparting momentum through her constant motion. When we reach the sea shore, our true nature- the primitive traits hidden in our blood- come out and manifest in our behavior. Some run along the shore, some dive into the waves, some howl loudly and some kick waves as they come. Some build castles in the air sitting on sand and some weep remembering their sorrows, as they all are in the presence of their beloved consoling watching mothers. As John F. Kennedy noted, ‘all of us have in our veins the exact same percentage of salt in our blood that exists in the ocean from whence we came; we have salt in our blood, we have salt in our sweat, we have salt in our tears, in the exact percentage.’ 

‘The sea is something that does not like to be restrained, something always tossing and restless, hiding even high mountains in great unfathomable depths, revealing only tops of those mountains here and there as islands situated between great distances’. The sea has its own serenity, calmness and majesty which beckon regular fishermen and occasional travellers to forget their miseries as long as they are enveloped in her protective wash of spray’. Without sea travels in his ship The Beagle, and research in the Galapagos Islands, Darwin could not have come up with the theory that man descended from the apes in the forests.

ANNEXURE II: ADDITIONAL INFORMATION: FAMOUS WORKS ON SEA.

  13. A coconut glade by sea shore in Kerala By ReNiz.

Famous sea poems of the world.


Since the time of the famous Iliad and the Odyssey by Homer, there have been quite a number of famous poems on the sea. The most noted among them are The Rime of the Ancient Mariner (1798) Samuel Taylor Coleridge, On The Sea (1817) John Keats, The Secret of the Sea (1850) Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, The Sailor Boy (1861) Alfred Lord Tennyson, O Captain! My Captain! (1865) Walt Whitman, Forsaken Merman Matthew Arnold, A Ballad of Boding (1881) Christina Rossetti, Requiem(1887) and Christmas at Sea (1888) Robert Louis Stevenson, Crossing the Bar (1889) Alfred Lord Tennyson, A Sailors Song (1899) by Paul Laurence Dunbar, Wander Thirst by Gerald Gould and Sea Fever (1902) by John Masefield. Lord Byron’s Childe Harold’s Pilgrimage also contains magnificent cantos on the sea. 

Classic sea novels, adventures and travelogues.


Novels, travelogues and adventures on sea are not few. They abound in numbers and it would take more lives to read them all. Daniel Defoe’s Robinson Crusoe 1719, James Cook’s The Journals of Captain Cook 1768-1779, Charles Darwin’s The Voyage of the Beagle 1839, Herman Melville’s White Jacket 1850 and Moby-Dick 1851, Victor Hugo’s The Toilers of the Sea 1866, Jules Verne’s Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea 1870, Robert Louis Stevenson’s Treasure Island 1883, Rudyard Kipling’s Captains Courageous 1896, Joseph Conrad’s Lord Jim 1900, Jack London’s The Sea Wolf 1904, Rafael Sabatini’s The Sea-Hawk 1915, Ernest Shackleton’s The Last Antarctic Expedition of Shackleton 1919, Rafael Sabatini’s Captain Blood: His Odyssey 1922, Thor Heyerdahl’s Kon-Tiki 1950, Ernest Hemingway’s The Old Man and the Sea 1952 and, of course, Peter Benchley’s Jaws 1974 are a noted few among the classic novels, travelogues and adventures written with sea as the background. 

Classic films on sea adventure.



There are hundreds of movies made based on adventures, life, battles, disasters and calamities on seas. Since when movie was invented, before trains and cars, the sea was a favourite subject for movie makers. The number of magnificent sea movies are in hundreds so cannot be included here, for fear of doing the injustice of omitting many famous and beautiful ones. 

The finest songs of Sarojini Naidu noted for musical quality and her books.
 

The finest songs of Sarojini Naidu based on their musical quality as selected by this writer are Indian Weavers, Palanquin Bearers, Coromandel Fishers and The Queen’s Rival. The published books by Sarojini Naidu are The Golden Threshold: 1905, The Bird of Time: 1912, The Broken Wing: 1917, Muhammad Jinnah: An Ambassador of Unity: 1916, The Sceptred Flute Posthumously: 1943, The Feather of the Dawn Posthumously: 1961 and The Indian Weavers Posthumously: 1971.
 
ANNEXURE III:

Bloom Books Channel has a video of Coromandel Fishers.

 
14. Coromandel Fishers Video Title Image By Moon Sun 1981.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dhL8txK6RGI

Coromandel Fishers was written by Sarojini Naidu in the 1920s. It’s one of the most famous and endeared songs in the English language. A primitive prototype rendering of this song was made with a crude tape recorder decades earlier, in 1984. In 2014, a home made video of this song was released. This third version is comparatively better. The next version, we hope, would be fully orchestrated. This song was originally part of the project PROPÈS INDIA or ‘Project For The Popularization of English Songs In India’, recorded from an English class by Mr. P S Remesh Chandran. Today it belongs to Bloom Books Channel’s Sing A Song Project for Children. It's free for reuse, and anyone interested can develop and build on it, till it becomes a fine musical video production, to help our little learners, and their teachers. Rushes of the original recordings were made available from the archives of Sahyadri Books & Bloom Books, Trivandrum. Our listeners mostly comprised of teachers and students who needed, and demanded, studio-versions with more clarity. Though beyond our limited resources, we release these new versions, for them. We thank them all for their support and goodwill. Why we, with only scanty resources, prepared these recordings in the first place and released them and made them mostly public domain can be read about in the article, 'My First English Recitation Videos Took Thirty Years To Produce By P S Remesh Chandran' here: http://sahyadribooks-remesh.blogspot.in/2014/05/058-my-first-english-recitation-videos.html

Bloom Books Channel’s video of Indian Weavers.

15. Indian Weavers Video Title Image By Radio Free Barton.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Un-pWZcPmv4

 
Indian Weavers was written by Sarojini Naidu in the 1920s. Besides being a great poetess, she was one of the leading figures of the Indian Independence Movement. This article therefore is also a lookout into what happened to the weavers of India after independence. Indian weavers who were once favorites in king’s homes to poor man’s huts are now pushed to extinction by governments, politicians, large textile mills and arrogant bureaucrats. Suppose Sarojini Naidu returns, and finds this? Read the full article here: http://sahyadribooks-remesh.blogspot.in/2017/07/076-indian-weavers-sarojini-naidu-poem.html July 2017 

Also read The Life And Works Of Sarojini Naidu by P. S. Remesh Chandran.

  16. Life And Works Article Title By Sahyadri Archives.

‘It is impossible to tell whether Sarojini Naidu was a poet or a politician. She left her footprints in both fields and her achievements in poetry and politics make it impossible for us to select either one as her favourite field. From studying in England as a teenager to dying while at work in the UP Governor’s office in India as Governor, her life was one of the most vibrant tales of Indian women, stretching through nations and touching peoples in Asia, Europe, Africa and America.’ (Excerpt from the article). Read the full article here: http://sahyadribooks-remesh.blogspot.in/2017/06/075-life-and-works-of-sarojini-naidu.html June 2017 

Links to Sarojini Naidu’s works by the author.

1. The Life And Works Of Sarojini Naidu: Article

Article: http://sahyadribooks-remesh.blogspot.in/2017/06/075-life-and-works-of-sarojini-naidu.html June 2017

2. Indian Weavers: Poem

Article: http://sahyadribooks-remesh.blogspot.in/2017/07/076-indian-weavers-sarojini-naidu-poem.html July 2017
Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Un-pWZcPmv4 May 2015

3. Coromandel Fishers: Poem

Article: https://sahyadribooks-remesh.blogspot.com/2018/11/083-coromandel-fishers-sarojini-naidu.html November 2018
Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dhL8txK6RGI May 2015

(Prepared from an English Poetry Class by P S Remesh Chandran)

First Published: 09 November 2018
Last Edited:

 17. Article Title Image 2 & Graphics By Adobe SP.

___________________________
Pictures Courtesy: Wikimedia Commons
___________________________

Picture Credits:

01 Article Title Image & Graphics By Adobe SP
02 Sustaining life in the planet By Cobber 17
03 A playful child at sea shore By Sailu.d18
04 Children are always happy in water By Biswarup Ganguly
05 Papa will be back soon. Child with mother By Biswarup Ganguly
06 Bondages as old as the sea By Biswarup Ganguly
07 Resting at home after work By Biswarup Ganguly
08 Kerala Fishermen launching boat By Prime Jyothi
09 Fishermen's catch in Bangladesh By Balaram Mahalder
10 Fishermen Life 1832 Painting By Carl Portmann 2
11 Fisherman's Family Awaiting Return 19th C Painting By Unknown
12 The eternal fascination for man By Vinayaraj
13 A coconut glade by sea shore in Kerala By ReNiz
14 Coromandel Fishers Video Title Image By Moon Sun 1981
15 Indian Weavers Video Title Image By Radio Free Barton
16 Life And Works Article Title By Sahyadri Archives
17 Article Title Image 2 & Graphics By Adobe SP
18 Author Profile Of P S Remesh Chandran By Sahyadri Archives

About the Author P. S. Remesh Chandran: 

18. Author Profile Of P S Remesh Chandran By Sahyadri Archives.

Editor of Sahyadri Books & Bloom Books, Trivandrum. Author of several books in English and in Malayalam. And also author of Swan: The Intelligent Picture Book. Born and brought up in the beautiful village of Nanniyode in the Sahya Mountain Valley in Trivandrum, in Kerala. Father British Council trained English teacher and Mother University educated. Matriculation with distinction and Pre Degree Studies in Science with National Merit Scholarship. Discontinued Diploma studies in Electronics and entered politics. Unmarried and single. 

Author of several books in English and in Malayalam, mostly poetical collections, fiction, non fiction and political treatises, including Ulsava Lahari, Darsana Deepthi, Kaalam Jaalakavaathilil, Ilakozhiyum Kaadukalil Puzhayozhukunnu, Thirike Vilikkuka, Oru Thulli Velicham, Aaspathri Jalakam, Vaidooryam, Manal, Jalaja Padma Raaji, Maavoyeppoleyaakaan Entheluppam!, The Last Bird From The Golden Age Of Ghazals, Doctors Politicians Bureaucrats People And Private Practice, E-Health Implications And Medical Data Theft, Did A Data Mining Giant Take Over India?, Will Dog Lovers Kill The World?, Is There Patience And Room For One More Reactor?, and Swan, The Intelligent Picture Book. 

Face Book: https://www.facebook.com/psremeshchandra.trivandrum
Twitter: https://twitter.com/PSRemeshChandra
Google Plus: https://plus.google.com/+PSRemeshChandran
You Tube: http://www.youtube.com/user/bloombooks/videos
Blog: http://sahyadribooks-remesh.blogspot.com/
Site: https://sites.google.com/site/timeuponmywindowsill/
E-Mail: bloombookstvm@gmail.com
 
Post: P. S. Remesh Chandran, Editor, Sahyadri Books, Trivandrum, Padmalayam, Nanniyode, Pacha Post, Trivandrum- 695562, Kerala State, South India.

Tags:


Coromandel Fishers, English Poems Prose, English Indian Poets, Fishermen’s Life, Free Student Notes, Literary Articles Essays Reviews, Poem Reviews Notes Appreciations, Politician Poets, P S Remesh Chandran, Sahyadri Books Trivandrum, Sarojini Naidu, Sea Poems Films Books, 


Identifier: SBT-AE-083. Coromandel Fishers. Sarojini Naidu Poem. Appreciation. P. S. Remesh Chandran. Sahyadri Books & Bloom Books, Trivandrum. 

Published by Sahyadri Books & Bloom Books, Trivandrum. 
Editor: P S Remesh Chandran.